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**550BC** · 04-18-2014, 11:12 AM

Not a fan of ''fashion'' blogs, but like this one http://blackparadox.us and of course http://leparadox.com/en/

**rider** · 05-01-2014, 12:11 PM

partnouveau.com

**Faust** · 05-01-2014, 01:15 PM

This is fun, rider!

**aya1293** · 05-31-2014, 05:05 AM

I would like to suggest my own newly established website.

www.sonzaishinai.com

Although it is and will be a slow process in uploading content, I intend for it to be of high quality and fairly original.

Feel free to take a look and offer this amateur any advise.

Thanks!

**Faust** · 05-31-2014, 06:10 AM

I suggest never writing the words "dark style fashion" again.

**aya1293** · 05-31-2014, 07:57 PM

Thank you for your input Faust. Much appreciated!

What would you suggest this style be called? I don't want to just label it as "fashion" since I feel that term is too broad.

**upsilonkng** · 06-02-2014, 01:11 AM

how about that black shit? .. or the super expensive dark stuff.. or style dark fashion, or fashion style dark (er)?
it's ur blog man, u should really be making the call on that, I mean Faust can come up w/ a tagline but it'll costs u...

**interest1** · 06-02-2014, 04:09 AM

Originally posted by aya1293 View Post

I would like to suggest my own newly established website.

www.sonzaishinai.com

Although it is and will be a slow process in uploading content, I intend for it to be of high quality and fairly original.

Feel free to take a look and offer this amateur any advise.

Thanks!

I'd suggest removing "dark style fashion" – and not replacing it with anything, actually. You can cut the entire second half out, too. An explanation isn't necessary because what you're saying is a given. Every blog has 'carefully filtered content to the bias of its creator' (or so the creator would like to think). Here's my two-cent edit:

A SPACE TO TAKE INSPIRATION, TO FIND, AND IMMERSE ONESELF.

Let the viewer fill in the blanks. No need to spell everything out for them.

Bon chance!

**aya1293** · 06-02-2014, 07:01 AM

Originally posted by upsilonkng View Post

how about that black shit? .. or the super expensive dark stuff.. or style dark fashion, or fashion style dark (er)?
it's ur blog man, u should really be making the call on that, I mean Faust can come up w/ a tagline but it'll costs u...

I know, and I would, make my own call on what would be said but I am still interested in what other people call this style of fashion. Out of curiosity, I also want to hear the reason why Faust is so against the term "dark style fashion".

Originally posted by interest1 View Post

I'd suggest removing "dark style fashion" – and not replacing it with anything, actually. You can cut the entire second half out, too. An explanation isn't necessary because what you're saying is a given. Every blog has 'carefully filtered content to the bias of its creator' (or so the creator would like to think). Here's my two-cent edit:

A SPACE TO TAKE INSPIRATION, TO FIND, AND IMMERSE ONESELF.

Let the viewer fill in the blanks. No need to spell everything out for them.

Bon chance!

Thanks for the input interest1 !
I like that it ends at that. Simple and to the point. However, it makes me think immerse oneself in what?

I see your point in that every blog owner assumes their content is carefully filtered. It makes me re-think about what to write in the about page. Also whether there should even be an about page anymore.

Thank you very much for your feedback and help!

. Thanks!

Ended up decided to not have an about page at all.

Thanks for all the feedback!

**interest1** · 06-02-2014, 04:55 PM

Originally posted by aya1293 View Post

. . .

Ended up decided to not have an about page at all.

Thanks for all the feedback!

You saw where I was going with that.

In lieu of an About page, you could add a simple one-line 'intro' beneath your header if you feel you want to clarify what your site has to offer. Just a thought.

I'm going to take my editor cap off and put my flip flops on now.

**aya1293** · 06-04-2014, 08:08 AM

Yes! It helps to get other peoples perspectives so you can see your own work from an angle you've never seen it before.

Thanks for all the help and advise!