They all look so..... Japanese inspired clothes, more like the japanese samurai versions. Don't get me wrong here, i am a content writer at online essay help service but i do have a taste for fashion as well. I think maybe if you would have made the clothes a bit skinny or the guy wearing them a bit more healthier, so that the clothes were of good fit to him, the presentation would have been looking something good related to this one.
^ Man, you are going to have to develop a thicker skin when putting any creative endeavor into the world. I know it is part of you, but this is a good learning experience that might as well come sooner than later.
Besides, robschneider's comments were mild in the scheme of things. "Japanese inspired clothes" is only logical if you call title your post "recent uni work." ;-)
Sketches are good) shows the influence of Rafa and comme des garcone, but for today it becomes extras. You need to find an audience or if she is to find out her opinion and not follow the trends
Super good work