post your work and creations

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Subway Mouth, marker on paper, 25.2 X 35.5 cm

[genevieveryoko]

ftb, your random contributions in this tread are easily becoming one of my favorite things about sz...wonder what it was that you deleted

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a poem i didn't like that much and an abstract doodly ipad drawing

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Empire, collage and correction fluid on paper, 25.2 X 35.5 cm

[Farkhanyassin]

Try framing that

[Vanna]

Fade, I agree with Genevieve. I enjoy your contributions to this thread and the photo thread. Keep it up, mister.

And JoniF, here is a pic.

Kaministiqiua
Oil on canvas
32x32in

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that is good Vanna, I respect your handling of paint.

[viv1984viv]

http://pyrrhicvictoriesagainst.blogspot.com/2011/07/poem-want-to-numb.html

feedback very welcome, let me know your impressions

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Viv you have a good grasp on the rhythm of words, it flows nicely and as i read some of your other poems on superfuture you seem to be grounded in a definite set of personal iconography which is good. but i feel on this particular poem these ideas may be explored in a more diverse or idiosyncratic manner. This comment is speaking to the piece as one of poetry to be read mainly on the page. If it were a song/read for music or some other performance/visual display then the criteria may be amended and this would be fine.

overall i would say if you were aiming mostly for a piece of text as aesthetic effect then you have succeeded.

[sistersuzie]

Vanna, i really like the texture of your paintings

as seen on design scene, from my upcoming collection;

[viv1984viv]

fade - thanks, I write almost all my stuff with an eye of text as an aesthetic... but rhythm is also pretty important to me, - this doesn't mean im not passionate about the content, the notions i'm trying to communicate - but I like composite words portmanteaus etc....

The piece is not part of anything outside of the blog, but I thought I'd try and use a a text reader to add an extra dimension to piece, with this piece in particular I felt it flowed well so wanted to hear it spoken, and wanted others to hear it as well as read it.

when you say "i feel on this particular poem these ideas may be explored in a more diverse or idiosyncratic manner" - do you mean I ought to try and push my particular style further, using my iconography/semiotics much harder - or do you mean I should try looking for other, new ways to communicate my notions??? - Comment if you have chance - no worries if not, don't want to clutter up the thread anyhow

V

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push the style you have further.

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Longing, Marker on Paper, 25.2 X 35.5 cm

[Myran]

Work in progress.

"Waking." Oil on canvas. 38x25in.

Great work!

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Talent, Ambition, Drive.