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I think the main mis-step in my opinion was showing what she was seeing - obviously more of a visual metaphor but I think it allowed you to weight the prior events against that and I'm not sure I liked the results. On the other hand, it certainly heightened the perversion as a result so it did amplify the physical sensation of the film.
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I think the main mis-step in my opinion was showing what she was seeing - obviously more of a visual metaphor but I think it allowed you to weight the prior events against that and I'm not sure I liked the results. On the other hand, it certainly heightened the perversion as a result so it did amplify the physical sensation of the film.
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