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Not bad, but needs work,
I like the second pic, as it shows the texture of the knit really well
and there is an interesting play between the color/ texture of models hair and the clouds in the background.
Also, you should always credit the clothing/ accessories designers in your work, it gives others an incentive to work with you (especially starting out when the only benits that exist might be the credits).
keep up the good work!“You know,” he says, with a resilient smile, “it is a hard world for poets.”
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Love the idea Je. I really like how your graphics are quite subtle in these B/W photographs. I didn't realise they were graphics at first glance tbh . It'll be interesting how you mesh them when the photoshoot is done in colour.
The only concern I would have would be how much work you need to put in for EVERY picture? Would it be viable in the long run? I'm assuming that every picture will have different graphics? If you could justify your time, cost, effort and customers turn around time then
I really love that last picture too. v nice.
Best of luck!
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nice location, backgrounds and editing. perhaps a little too lifted shadows, but it seems intented. I would've gone for a more natural look, or a more authentic and cheaper washed out "bad" black and white look for some edge.
Poses, expressions, narrative and flow needs work. I don't see anything.
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The "I am trying to look cool, but damn that position is fucking uncomfortable, let's try to not show how tense I am" poses don't make it for me though.
Overall, your photoshoots don't give me an ounce of dream. I mean, I see models, I see clothes, but I can't see a world where I feel transported and that's the point that really makes me appreciate a fashion editorial, or not.
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Originally posted by Dropt View PostPlease take a look at our work and samples below. We believe thats as a French and Canadian Chinese duo, we have an interesting story to tell.
regarding the story, this one doesn't quite convey that paris is on fire. the guys is sorta just chillin while everything burns in the bacground. shouldn't he be running for his life?
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